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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift01/23/11

Yes very good

Loved the twist at the end.
Never saw it coming.

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by seattlejack01/23/11

A good story

Shucks, I thought the ring thing was really going to work! Also a nice twist at the end. Thanks,
Jack

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by Anonymous01/24/11

Thanks... LIT won't let me log in, so I'm ANON today :-((

When you go read it again, you'll see some hints I planted about the twist. Things I *didn't* say count too. Now you know I planned to miss my stop to give the wife time to get home. I built up the ring backstory and added some tech to make it believable. I even included a sketch that didn't get posted.

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