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by vrosej1001/10/11

These make up a pretty damn good poem

composed of tercets but these aren't haiku; too many images, not internal comparison or association they do however hit on the ambiguity meter. Presented as a single unit, they make a pretty good poem though.

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by Angeline01/10/11

I agree with Vee

Taken together I like the clear images that create a picture of a time that is conveyed both physically and emotionally, and all with showing, not telling. Nice to read you again, and I wish you the best on your journey.

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