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no way
more than likely instead of him wanting to fuck her after the party he would have ignored her during and after the party. people do not act this way fiction needs to be based on reality not fantasy would have been better without this chapter.
ignore them....
I thought it was great! And it turned me on, Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Fiction means NOT TRUE!!!
Fiction means NOT TRUE, if you don't like my story fine! But, don't say it needs to be based on reality, it's called FICTION for a REASON!!
Great
This was a good story, but would be better as fiction, rather than fact based, as I did not think people would really act this way in a fact based story.
Hello Mr F*CKIN ANONYMOUS!!
FICTION MEANS NOT TRUE!! Why would I base something not true on fact? It's FAKE, UN TRUE, MADE UP ~ I based it on something MADE UP, hence the NOT TRUE behaviors!! Don't like it, don't read it!
i hope theres more to follow!
Cause you did leave a clif-hanger,and I hope you write another part to this! Great work!
OMG TOTAL CLIFF HANGER HOPE U FINISH CAUSE IF U DONT UR MENTL! !!!!!!!!! Plz finish I'm really honey and wet for another selection
dumb ass writer
fiction stories have to be based on reality if they aren't they are FANTASY and belong in that catagory ONLY. if doesn't sound real or possible then it doesn't belong here go back to school and learn. i wish the webmasters made the writers take a test before allowing them to post stories it just wastes their time ours and the sites space.
Cinnamon Sister
Did his sister's cunt have a hint of cinnamon taste? Mmmmm... delicious!
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Whats behind thepool house or who???
I was wondering
If you would like to finish this story off with a couple more chapters? Who is behind the pool house? do they keep this up when the parents get back? Are they going off to college together to live as a couple? Do the parents ever find out, maybe they know when a baby arrives. so much more fun to be had yet.
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