Don't like the cuckolding bit, but otherwise a good story
Can't really add anything to that.
I did like the saturday morning seduction scene, and tying over the sofa was very inventive, loved that.
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Anonymous01/13/11
what the hell
What the hell does 'knackered" mean as its a localize term not understood by many readers? Stop putting localized ism's in stories so everyone can understand.
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Anonymous01/13/11
what the hell?
Why should any UK author shy away from using "localised isms" when no US author ever considers the rest of the world by avoiding the use of localised Americanisms? Literotica is a .com site not a .co.us site.
"What the hell does 'knackered" mean as its a localize term not understood by many readers? Stop putting localized ism's in stories so everyone can understand."
Here is what I hear you saying, "I am lazy and don't want to expand my knowledge, I'm lazy and don't want to have to think, I'm lazy so you should dummy down so I can understand it".
Please join this site (IT'S FREE), then I/we can refer to you by name when I/we call you an idiot. You are selfish and self-centered. Your comment made it about you and not the story.
My review OF THE STORY, not bad but not great. Just another wank story.
Mark
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Anonymous01/06/12
Sex with "steps"
is not incest.
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Anonymous02/02/12
akward
hope the baby is worth it...
by
Anonymous09/13/12
Thanks
Hey, Thanks for making me cum just reading your story. I do feel bad for your husband though... he doesnt have you all to himself and that is a bond between a man and a woman that is like no other... and it is only a matter of time before you wander again to find what you need. I feel bad for Freddie's wife... she will never have him to herself if he is fucking you or thinking about fucking you. Kind of shallow and selfish of both of you... I feel bad for your daughter... she must never know... it will be hard for her when you and Frank eventually divorce... because you will... it is only a matter of time. You just dont have what it takes to stay together. So I guess I am sad for you.. but I am happy that you at least got some good sex out of it.
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Anonymous09/13/12
bad english
Learn english before you write anymore. The bad english moves into your expressions makink the story hard to follow
by
Anonymous05/04/14
Hooray for Freddie
I love these stories where the young guy takes matters into his hands and delivers a cataclysmic fucking. Nice read for a short story.
by
Anonymous12/23/14
Nice Fucktale!
Now this is a sell done (almost but not quite) incest story that REALLY holds your attention because of all the fucking details provided. It's almost a step-by-step guide into near incest. Your words are all well placed and there was no "dirty" connotation anywhere - just the wish that (1) the babe was real and (2) was fuckable by ME!! I'll get the cum rinsed out of my shorts as soon as I finish writing this epistle.
Keep up the fucking good work - I'll be reading some more of them!!!!
English
Don't like the cuckolding bit, but otherwise a good story
Can't really add anything to that.
I did like the saturday morning seduction scene, and tying over the sofa was very inventive, loved that.
what the hell
What the hell does 'knackered" mean as its a localize term not understood by many readers? Stop putting localized ism's in stories so everyone can understand.
what the hell?
Why should any UK author shy away from using "localised isms" when no US author ever considers the rest of the world by avoiding the use of localised Americanisms? Literotica is a .com site not a .co.us site.
An enjoyable read
I though the story was hot, and having the young stud seduce his step mother was hot. Young guy fucking older women is sexy.
Thanks for the erotic read
didn't turn me on
reminded me too much of Clinton09 stories..all are the same thing... just names change and events happen just about the same way... BORING
RE: What the hell
To quote you,
"What the hell does 'knackered" mean as its a localize term not understood by many readers? Stop putting localized ism's in stories so everyone can understand."
Here is what I hear you saying, "I am lazy and don't want to expand my knowledge, I'm lazy and don't want to have to think, I'm lazy so you should dummy down so I can understand it".
Please join this site (IT'S FREE), then I/we can refer to you by name when I/we call you an idiot. You are selfish and self-centered. Your comment made it about you and not the story.
My review OF THE STORY, not bad but not great. Just another wank story.
Mark
Sex with "steps"
is not incest.
akward
hope the baby is worth it...
Thanks
Hey, Thanks for making me cum just reading your story. I do feel bad for your husband though... he doesnt have you all to himself and that is a bond between a man and a woman that is like no other... and it is only a matter of time before you wander again to find what you need. I feel bad for Freddie's wife... she will never have him to herself if he is fucking you or thinking about fucking you. Kind of shallow and selfish of both of you... I feel bad for your daughter... she must never know... it will be hard for her when you and Frank eventually divorce... because you will... it is only a matter of time. You just dont have what it takes to stay together. So I guess I am sad for you.. but I am happy that you at least got some good sex out of it.
bad english
Learn english before you write anymore. The bad english moves into your expressions makink the story hard to follow
Hooray for Freddie
I love these stories where the young guy takes matters into his hands and delivers a cataclysmic fucking. Nice read for a short story.
Nice Fucktale!
Now this is a sell done (almost but not quite) incest story that REALLY holds your attention because of all the fucking details provided. It's almost a step-by-step guide into near incest. Your words are all well placed and there was no "dirty" connotation anywhere - just the wish that (1) the babe was real and (2) was fuckable by ME!! I'll get the cum rinsed out of my shorts as soon as I finish writing this epistle.
Keep up the fucking good work - I'll be reading some more of them!!!!
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