Wishing: A Sex Genie Story Ch. 00

Well written thus far, continue.

Waiting for more

I enjoy this genre and this story is starting well.

more

like it so far looking forward to more. P.S. I also really wish Joe Brolly would finish his story.

Good Start

As a fan of JOE BROLLY and 800IbGorrila i an happy to see another story added to this world hope to see more from you and if JOE BROLLY and 800IbGorrila read this please continue your stories too.

Good start :)

Tis lovely to see someone continuing this tradition.

I am hoping there will be a good deal of character depth and back-story ;)

Keep up the good work!

Looks good so far

I'm excited for another sex genie story. The 0'th chapter was a good read, and I'm looking forward to the rest.

Thanks.

Good story

But 350lbs? Really? Do you have any idea how heavy that is and incredibly FAT he would be? He would have to be the size of a sumo wrestler! So that alone ruined it for me.

Please

Please dont leave this one unfinished like 800 did ^_^

Yea!

As another fan of JOE BROLLY & 800IbGorrila, I'm happy to see another sex genie story. I'm interested to see where you go with this. And as an aside to the "sumo wrestler" comment - the character is 6'6"! Muscles & bones weigh more than fat. Granted the character isn't a bean pole - but that was already stated.

From A Big Guy

I am 6'6" 350 #, with a 54" Chest and 50" pants. Dont let them kid you....you got the measurements right!

Good but:

It was to short. This was 1/3 a chapter.

Agreed excelant

I agree you have the porportions right I myself am 6'8 and for the first time in my lie about what you list but fisacally other than a pants size most people haven't knoticed I gained any weight when your that big with for me is is last I checked 58 extra tall jacket its not rediqulious. loved the fact the shouldres still fit in his shirt as well people usually forget that shoulders don't really gain weight

poor kid

wowthat was really cool...
i like how you described them!!!

he's the first one that I'd read that seem to have fast enough reaction to avoid genie gas, but fail and hurt himself anyway. lol

There is a synopsis

I used to edit this story, but had to stop then NukeEmFromOrbit quit too. There is a synopsis at the end of chapter 4 for those interested.