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Mustang Romance Ch. 02

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by Phxray5401/13/11

Colorful

Colorful way of character development. Lots of plot potential. Good idea not to go overboard with a Texas accent. Hard to keep an audience with the time between chapters but you're making worth the wait.

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by cantfightfate01/15/11

Liked it

but she's got to be a little naive to be putting up with Levi's moves and Luke's posturing. Most women would be annoyed at being fought over like a piece of meat. She's just sitting there and accepting it. That doesn't ring true for me. Looking forward to more, though!

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