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I love this poem.
Very cool slice of life stuff. You are getting a recommend.
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It was a clinical attack,
surgical in its precision.
Isn't this something of a repitition and wouldn't the it be a stronger read to start 'surgical in its precision'.
Half heard conversations in pubs are always wonderfully surreal and intriging, they leave so much for a fertile imagination to ponder on.
Really liked this one
Isn't it interesting to overhear snippets of conversation? You taking this one and turning it into a poem (assuming that's what happened) was brilliant. I sensed you desired her passion for yourself.
LIVING AND LOVING IS DANGEROUS
especially with anothers mate. TK U MLJ LV NV
wow!
a lighter as a flame thrower and " the moustache of a quiet man". such strong words, such absolutely perfect descriptions. I know in the future I will be looking at moustaches, wondering which is that of a quiet man. You are quite the poet!
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