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More?!
I hope you wrote or are writing more!
Your pacing and writing are great. Keep it up.
First Rate
Very well written! I hope you'll be back with more.
'Cynthia'? Or should that be 'Kelly'?
"They were packing their bags and Cynthia said, "I suppose we should have THE TALK, shouldn't we?"
Huh?
He WAS shacked up with Kelly. When did Cynthia get in on the act?
Excellent Writing
Enjoyed this story hope you are writing additions chapters to this beautiful love story.
DISAPPOINTING ..................
...............that for whatever reason you never really finished this wonderfully fulfilling and compelling story. Probably impossible for anyone not familiar with the rules and administrative procedures of a church environment to realistically complete this story, so you have left many of us hanging - so to speak - wondering how this matter might one day be resolved to everyone's mutual acceptance..
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