The Sailing Trip

Lost at Sea

So then what happened? Did the drug wear off? Did Lynn lock Kim in the brig? Did they sail off into the sunset? And why should I care? Make me want to care about Kim and Lynn, tell me about them as people. The rich gay divorcee and the naif student are cliches. But Lynn the person and Kim the person should be people.

throw a lifeline?

Hello

Are you going to write a follow up?

In all honesty, I am torn about reading a sequel ... you did an amazing job on the build up and even to give the reader something to think about.

So well, done ... I will read a sequel if you write one. Just keep the level of excitement the same ... this one was awesome!

Thank you

Tim

Please write more, Please.

Love it!

I'm sure, if this is any indication, you are a master at eating pussy. I'm a 42 year old mom and would love to be naked with you. So hot!

name change

why does Lyn's name change from Stockman to Anderson? Bad editing, that's why.
The story is too short, ends too bluntly. doesn't have enough characters in it, I mean you have the opportunity to make this a great lesbian cruise, but it falls short. Sorry, I cant rate it.

Fun

It's great, I just wish you would write a sequal to it! :) Thanks for writing! XD

This was very interesting but I wish it was longer

Nice

Lynn is a little aggressive, I wish you would expand the story...

Good start

Enjoyed the story line and the description of the sex.
I wish Lynn would not have used the assistance of the drug and seduced her naturally. You have the story set up well for another chapter.... and perhaps a sequel. Good start.