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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
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Once again you've conjured up the scene beautifully. It left me wanting more, infact I think you could flesh it out a bit - the sound of the rain beginning sets the mood nicely but is the wind strong and is it blowing dust etc, do the cockatoos make a noise as they fly? (I remember the galahs and the noise they make.)

Wll done!

Tess

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