All Comments on 'While I Was Sleeping'

This seems a both tender and exciting moment for the writer

I loved the way you jumped straight into the story. It was hot, vibrating and truly held my attention.

If I may though, personally I would have put some explanation at to what the tour was about as it was an ambiguous but I feel integral part of the story.

Hope to read more of your word

A little too short maybe, but effective all the same.

Very arousing and innocent at the same time...very hot and sexy I really enjoyed it...

It struck me as innocent, too. I hope you do more stories :)

So nice to see a short, finely crafted piece on Literotica.

Thanks for the comments. This was my first attempt at an erotic story.

As far as more info about the tour, I was reticent about adding more details. I suppose I could have made something up, but wanted to stay as closely as possible to what really happened.

It was nice to read a tender, rather innocent story, rather than those that begin with how big everyone's cocks are (vastly exaggerated) and quickly going from feeling each other up and rapidy progressing to dirty talk and fucking. I'm an oral only guy, so this was very refreshing.

Please continue to write, you have talent. The characters are excellent, very erotic and sexy. Yum.

thank you i loved your story , so glad i found this site so many amazing sexy horny stories .

What a fun story, I wonder how many other straight men dream of having their cocks milked bu a close friend as that friend rubs their naked cock between their thighs or ass cheeks until both cock irrupt making a soiled mess of the bed and each other. Great story.

Bravo! Bravissimo!

Your story is my cup of tea 100% & then some & then a tad more.

(I wish this had happened to me!)

I wish i had been more adventurous in my college days & ever since. I have been bi curious since onset of puberty. Homosexual impulses would be rather intense for a period of time & afterwards they would be dormant for a much longer time. Sometimes i knew what (or who) had triggered the return of homosexual desires. Occasionally the homosexual impulses would just be back seemingly on their own.

Experimenting with bi fun is something we all secretly wanna try! I often fantasized about giving a couple of my high school buddies in gym an ass job...

It is a long story, I'll try and shorten it.

I was in the military before gays were allowed in. I worked in administration in a criminal investigation. We got files from all over the Air Force of crimes.

From time-to-time we would get a Sexual Assault case. A guy sleeping in the dorm would wake up to find his roommate sucking his cock. A fight would ensue.

I often wondered how many blow jobs were being given and no violence occurred and maybe there a favored would be returned.

I always wanted a roommate to wake me up like that.

Loved your story.