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by Anonymous01/20/11

Not real good

You begin telling a story, then telling the story as if you are talking to your couple, then continue to go back and forth - no consistency, makes for a confusing story. Also grammer isn't too great. "Steve like them as well".; ""Yeah, it's quite cool to read about how other men sees my wife"; etc. More proof reading required.
Content might be ok but I couldn't finish reading because of the above. YES, I am anal!! Sorry!

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