All Comments on 'The Defiled Temple Ch. 06'

you did a great job of making the sex scene between malika and pugward more detailed, i thoroughly enjoyed it! i cant wait to see what type of fun malika and pugward have out in the real world, and whether they will include someone they meet in their bedtime activities. i cant wait to see how the towns people react to the new sorceress and demon, i think it will be very interesting indeed. keep up the good work!!!!!

but i like this story and the characters. dont be dicouraged by the lack of comments, im shure everyone is just speechless over your l33t writing skilz

Another great chapter. The details are just right and the story flows nicely from one part to the next. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

You are doing such a awesome job. Keep it up !! I can't wait to see what comes next !

Can we have another chapter? Pretty please?! ^^

Love your work, like to see it continued.

MAN, I AM JUST LEARNING ENGLISH BUT I LIKE TO TELL YOU THAT I LOVE YOUR STORIES, ITS A GREAT WAY TO STAY MOTIVATED FOR LEARNING THIS LENGUAGE. THANK YOU

Can't wait to see the next story!

Any chance we see more? I really liked how this story has been going so far.

WHERE IS SEQUEL? I AM GETTING A TAD IMPATIENT. please continue your great work.

I really liked

Pretty pleeease?

For here on it's another world with men. So take your time and build a world with Orc's and Elves. I believe you have given us already some dark and light elf action.

Why don't you give us some dragon action also.

Let them summon a dragon for the great search for new male magicians.

plz write more this is like one of those books that you never want to end plllz write more ty

This story is, quite frankly, awesome. I love the characters and their personalities as well as just the simple outlook that Pugward adopts. I always thought that the 'elder demons' must have gotten bored with all the sin they can have down in hell. I have to say though, you have done something with this story that only one other author on this site has done (800lbgorilla with 'A Beautiful Wish') and that is get me so fixated on the story that I've lost track of time and devoured it in one sitting. I cannot wait to see more!

These stories are hot, and while I like Pugward getting with the girls, I love that all the girls are fucking each other all the time. Please keep that up, and please give us some more chapters! Can't wait to read what happens next!

PLEASE continue the story.

I love the twists and turns in it.

It's almost April and the last update from you was in December. So, yeah...how's it going?

Yup, still here and still writing. I can't tell you when my next work will be out or what it'll be but I haven't given up!

Cant wait for the next chapter Keep em coming

I sure hope that you havent dropped it and wish to read the next chaoter as soon as possible

I read this months ago, and ran across it again recently. Please do continue, Lien Geller! It's a great story.

loved the story as much or maybe nearly as much as aphrodisia.

but when you going to finish either story???????

I love this story bt I see a pattern wit all ur work : u dnt finish. Ur series.

Id love to read more about Malika, Shanti, and Pugward.

Loved it we want more

A lovely ending to a delightful short story.

Im assuming this was the intended ending even tho a lot of ppl are griping for you to continue it. In my opinion there isn't much else you could add to make it better :)

The story is enjoyable and a good read. However, it is incomplete. You started a new plot with the girls cleaning up the temple and the interaction with the world but you didn't finish it. I hope you decide to finish it.

The whole story was epic...umm this was my first sex story ever and it was amazing masturbation material for me thank you for helping me to have my first set of multiple organs ever!

coming soon? I see from your profile page you've been on literotica recently...so I feel fairly confident you aren't deceased. As such, might I ask...are you considering finishing this story? It'd be a real shame to leave it unfinished, IMO. Entertaining plot, coupled to erotic sexual content, with a dash of excellently rendered fantasy elements, just to add flavor...honestly, man, it's a recipe for success. Not to mention I'm hooked and need catharsis. I just read what there is to read of Path of the Necromancer, and that was a punch in the gut unfinished story...don't do what that author did, please. :)

is there going to be more installments of this story/ it is really good. when i read pugwards lines i hear Danny Devitos voice, anyone else hear that too?

Really enjoying this story. Please do continue with it...

Steve Buscemi is the perfect voice actor for Pugward...a bit nasal and tenor rather than rich, deep and comforting.

It's gotten to the point that I always check the comments of the last chapter of a story first to see if people are complaining about it not being finished. If I notice those, I won't even begin reading it ...

Just got done reading all 6 chapters and loved each one, thank you for writing them. Pugward is a awesome character.

more please!

So, Lien. Since you're apparently back in the saddle again after your recent Missing Dragon addition, any chance you're going to revisit this story as well?

Please please please please pls

More please

Can't wait for you to be able to get back to writing, I have enjoyed reading all your stories.

This story has been unfinished for near 7 years. Sorry, but unfinished stories get 1* until finished.

I really love how this story is/was going. It's fun, when I didn't expect to be, I thought it was going to be a more serious affair.

Love your other stories as well, but I felt I needed to say how much I've loved this one so far.

Can't wait for more, if there is more down the pipeline :)

Loved this story when I read it years ago, and it is still my favourite of all your works. I hope to see another chapter someday.

love this story so far! I hope you continue it soon.

My 2 cents

Great story. Sorry you stopped writing it. Thanks for your time and your imagination.

This story in good but it needs more chapters. PLEASE add more.

Never get enough of pugward and the girls. Look forward to it's continuation.

I hope that there is more of this story coming and hopefully soon!!!

Would have loved to see this evolve further. You have created strong, relatable characters. You created a demon who has become a willing servant and resident horn-dog. His age lends the wisdom of mentorship to the inexperienced girls. The humour adds a welcome levity that is generally absent in fantasy tales. I find this to be the case, having read your other stories. It’s been an enjoyable experience.