Conceal Me What I Am Ch. 10

Good one

Well, it's definitely far out there, but some pretty good humor in the reading. Keep up the good work against the forces of evil, now located in Utah.

I really like the way he handled the dragon! Very good writing.

Cheater!

Dragons are supposed to be slain! Not with biological weapons but with steel! Very good treatment by the way, your humor keeps me coming back to see what will happen next. 5 stars and waiting for more.
You might be hearing from the PETD people or whoever has issues with the way dragons are treated.

genius dragon slaying haha

the way you had zak defeat the dragon would of made terry pratchett proud ha!

once again 5 stars for a 5 star story, who needs sex in a yarn this good i ask.....

love it

This is just pour genus love it beat a dragon with stale corn beef sandwich so funny.

Dialogue

That's the only thing you need to fix about your story writing. I've gotten so unused to seeing your characters speak that I pause every time I see anyone speak. Also, you might want to spend a bit more time developing characters. For instance, the brownie. All that I have gotten about him from the story is that he's basically a powerful midget that likes to get drunk.
Otherwise, very nice story.