One can always count on this author for a well told tale.
...with the first sentence, then the first paragraph. I don't normally look at stories in this [I/T] genre, but I'm glad I clicked and read. Be looking for your name in the future. 5.
This was a very good start. Can Daddy keep everyone happy or will he need to bring in some reserves? This business sounds rather interesting, maybe you could tell more about it and the action that takes place there. Is it G, R or maybe even X rated?
Really enjoyed it, but was kinda dissapointed that sex With Paula for her first time wasnt a lot more descriptive and involved ...was looking forward to something crazy/amazing with big daddy and tiny lil Paula ;) Fun anyway! Thanks!
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One can always count on this author for a well told tale.
You got me...
...with the first sentence, then the first paragraph.
I don't normally look at stories in this [I/T] genre, but I'm glad I clicked and read. Be looking for your name in the future.
5.
I hope that this continues
This was a very good start. Can Daddy keep everyone happy or will he need to bring in some reserves?
This business sounds rather interesting, maybe you could tell more about it and the action that takes place there. Is it G, R or maybe even X rated?
Really enjoyed it, but was kinda dissapointed that sex With Paula for her first time wasnt a lot more descriptive and involved ...was looking forward to something crazy/amazing with big daddy and tiny lil Paula ;)
Fun anyway! Thanks!
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