Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 47

more please

was a long wait for this one and not a lot of info ~ have been loving this story!!!! More please

Smooth Story

He sort of forced her to stand her world on its head!

Excellent

I really enjoyed this chapter as she went through the process of a woman thinking about a wedding. I don't believe I have ever seen it explained this way and it all seems to have the ring of truth.

It has been a long wait.

Epic / Saga ---> Way Too Long Story!

It would be enjoyable if it had not been so long! 47 Chapters so far posted on Literotica is way too long!

What's Next? An indepth study of their Bathroom Habits?

You have carried this on for too long. it's time to cut to the chase. Find some new subjects and start again. Not to be mean but it's true.

I don't agree with the last two comments (as I write)

Yes, it is a long story, but they are only generally 1 page chapters and its a great story. I love dipping in and out of this. I don't look constantly for updates and love when I see a few more chapters have been added and I go look. It feels like an old friend now and I genuinely care about what happens to Ashley and Jeff.

There are other stories out there with a more speedy conclusion. Go look at those instead if you don't like this :)

Hella story,

but get on with. There's too much fluff.

A well written fluffy story. There is nothing wrong with it that a final edit at the end won't fix.

For one thing, you're posting in one page chapters. It would be better for many if you waited until you have a real chapter finished then post in 5 - 6 page chapters.

It's like watching in slow motion. There's nothing really wrong it's just......well......boring. No action, no conflict.

Even Baseball is more interesting to watch at that is like watch paint dry or grass grow.

Action, conflict, motivation......

I hate to say it but I have to kind of agree with the comments posted by others. It's not that I don't enjoy the story but doing one page chapters is kind of ridiculious. I also agree that the story seems to be moving at a rather slow pace, I think if you grouped 3 or 4 chapters together it might not seem that way but it does seem to be taking forever. If you could do more pages per chapter then I think the story would be better. Plus I was kind of let down by this chapter after such a long wait, I thought it would have been more.....just more.

Not up to par!

I have been looking forward to this installment for soooo long, and now I am just a tad disappointed. Not that it was bad, just that it seemed to drag on without a lot of content for the reader to chew or or become involved in. Maybe I am wrong...could just be me, but I was hoping for more.

Please, do not quit - I have savored this story

As I stated before - life. Thank you. I did not expect this when you began.

Damn it!

It's 3:08 AM and I need to get some sleep. But noooooo - there are another 40 or so chapters that are bellowing my name and begging for my attention.

I've read some great stuff on Lit, but this is an enthralling tale on a level all its own.