Sounds good to me
Basically, a great story. However, you should pay close attention to your grammar, spelling and sentence structure, it was a little hard to follow. Sounds like you've just read 50 Shades of Grey.
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Loving relationship?
Sounds good to me
Basically, a great story. However, you should pay close attention to your grammar, spelling and sentence structure, it was a little hard to follow. Sounds like you've just read 50 Shades of Grey.
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