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ok but...
you seriously need to learn how to write your stories in full paragraphs. it was to choppy the way you wrote it and had you written it normally it probably wouldn't have been a full page. find an editor
Actually.
If you read an Edda, or traditional saga, they are wrote exactly like this. I'm going for a story wrote like one of those Sagas, so it will sound and be written in stanzas like one of those Sagas. I'm terribly sorry I don't carefully construct 5 sentence at least paragraphs for all the sticklers. If you do not like how I structure my stories, find others to read.
Chapter 2
With faults I enjoyed it. Where is Chapter 2?
Chapter 2
Is being written, slowly but surely. With the two other stories I'm writing at the same time, it's taking me just a bit to get everything done.
I like it
My only problem is I'm not sure how to pronounce some of the names. It kind of reminds me of reading The Iliad or The Odyssey. Like an epic adventure in a way. I look forward to chapter 2.
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