Good ending, I suppose can only go so far.
But the usual high standard from you.
Please write more regularly. I know it takes time, but you've got talent.
Good story, but probably not up to par with other awesome rgjohn awesome production. I enjoyed it anyway. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work! ^__^
You are the best author I've found at all sites ever. Your stories are simply the best. That is exactly my fetish. Please register with me. Although I am from Germany, but understand your English. I think there is contact between us will be for both of us a great advantage. Maybe I have what you also interested and encouraging. And you may be more for me. So please sign up on my email. Wolfshund1@gmx.de
It is rare that an author writes more than 2 stories that I add to my 'Favourite Stories' list. By adding this story to my list, rgjohn now has FOUR stories. If he continues wrting stories as good as this and the others on my list, I will have to create a list just for his work.
5/5
This Part 02 rates my highest honor of "5 Stars", with no reservations at all
Toward the end of this story I was having some relutance to the coupling of the mothers, but came to accept the idea as a good thing, only because of the mother's incestual relationships with their sons and their mutual desires to also have children bred by their respective sons. Now the mothers are admitting their sons want three or four children each, and Becky even agrees that it would be a great ides for them, each mother to purposely risk being impregnated by their son's friend (rather than their own son)!!! It does add a kinky element to the situation, and excitement, and to my thinking, I LOVE the whole concept.
***rgjohn*** for the writer and author of this series of stories, PLEASE give us another sequel, segment to this continuing saga. There are so many situations that can be developed by these four individuals, and the promise of six to eight more children. The expansion of individuals should NOT expand beyond these two families as the risks of exposure increases and many other dubious elements and factors dilute the "coziness" of the character/families!!! Keep Up The Great Work!!.
but the various parts are interesting and overcome the flow problem. The language is well done, including spelling and grammar usage. I would like to see the next chapter (or two +) until after the babies are born. Keep writing! Your ideas are compelling.
Hope they both have a son and he can sukkle while there fucking , I love Jons storeys and cant wait to read the continuation of this story , hope it doesnt end here , anyone else agree ??
marry young sluts why not for older women to marry toy boys. Or of course,
be like me, stay married to a man I love and share with my mom and family.
It is wonderful !!!!!!
Sort of an amateurish story to begin with but you totally lost me when you got to the part about bringing in another man to share the duties of fucking his pregnant mother.... who he's 'deeply in love with' and is 'the love of his life'. That's where I stopped reading, came here, voted 2 **s, left this comment and say... "See ya'."
English
Great quality usual
Good ending, I suppose can only go so far.
But the usual high standard from you.
Please write more regularly. I know it takes time, but you've got talent.
^_^
Good story, but probably not up to par with other awesome rgjohn awesome production. I enjoyed it anyway. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work! ^__^
yes
i liked it , a turn on for me, if we had no one to answer to how wild would we be
BEST BEST BEST AUTHOR
You are the best author I've found at all sites ever. Your stories are simply the best. That is exactly my fetish. Please register with me. Although I am from Germany, but understand your English. I think there is contact between us will be for both of us a great advantage. Maybe I have what you also interested and encouraging. And you may be more for me. So please sign up on my email. Wolfshund1@gmx.de
Wonderful
Beautifully written and edited.
A little bit of everything in this story, and all erotic.
It a good thought that the women would get pregnant by the other's son. That is kinky.
Thanks for the very good read
Favourite Author
It is rare that an author writes more than 2 stories that I add to my 'Favourite Stories' list. By adding this story to my list, rgjohn now has FOUR stories. If he continues wrting stories as good as this and the others on my list, I will have to create a list just for his work.
5/5
Great!!
That was an awesome story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was a five even though I gave it a one. I honestly thought it was a 10.
holy fuck
i loved this story very much. i loved fucking my mother and started when i was very young. keep up the good work.
damn hot
one of the finest story lines keep it going
rgjohn is to damn good!
Every story this man has written, I hate to see end!
Awesome!!!
I wish there were more, would love to see what the Mom's do when their breasts are full of milk...
Becky and Her Son Pt.02
This Part 02 rates my highest honor of "5 Stars", with no reservations at all
Toward the end of this story I was having some relutance to the coupling of the mothers, but came to accept the idea as a good thing, only because of the mother's incestual relationships with their sons and their mutual desires to also have children bred by their respective sons. Now the mothers are admitting their sons want three or four children each, and Becky even agrees that it would be a great ides for them, each mother to purposely risk being impregnated by their son's friend (rather than their own son)!!! It does add a kinky element to the situation, and excitement, and to my thinking, I LOVE the whole concept.
***rgjohn*** for the writer and author of this series of stories, PLEASE give us another sequel, segment to this continuing saga. There are so many situations that can be developed by these four individuals, and the promise of six to eight more children. The expansion of individuals should NOT expand beyond these two families as the risks of exposure increases and many other dubious elements and factors dilute the "coziness" of the character/families!!! Keep Up The Great Work!!.
Flow of the story is jagged,
but the various parts are interesting and overcome the flow problem. The language is well done, including spelling and grammar usage. I would like to see the next chapter (or two +) until after the babies are born. Keep writing! Your ideas are compelling.
More More
Very Hot and Sexy I would love to read more on these 2 couples.
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
MORE MORE MORE
great story
Come on give us at least a couple more parts I can tell from your writing that you can give more even if it is fantasy.
Scorching Hot
Excellent work on both of your stories. They are great reading . Keep more stories of this style coming.
more
Need more, great story!!!!
Awesome story!!!
My favorite to date!!! Keep them cumming!!!
Pregnant Moms , for sex wow
Hope they both have a son and he can sukkle while there fucking , I love Jons storeys and cant wait to read the continuation of this story , hope it doesnt end here , anyone else agree ??
that was fun !
marry young sluts why not for older women to marry toy boys. Or of course,
be like me, stay married to a man I love and share with my mom and family.
It is wonderful !!!!!!
Swinging Moms
. . .an extension of their love making? Give you five more stars for this entertaining story of lust, incest and knocked up tummies.
Two Stars for this one.
Sort of an amateurish story to begin with but you totally lost me when you got to the part about bringing in another man to share the duties of fucking his pregnant mother.... who he's 'deeply in love with' and is 'the love of his life'. That's where I stopped reading, came here, voted 2 **s, left this comment and say... "See ya'."
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