by zen one
Horrible sound quality and try to speak normally instead of working so hard to sound sexy. You have a nice accent, had an interesting story, but you ended up sounding like the guy from SLINGBLADE.
As a side note, clicking on your username sends me to someone named faunaDoll. Might want to contact Literotica on that.
I posted my comment before I read the others. Yes, clearer audio would be nice, but I still really liked the story. You have a great voice, don't try to hide your accent, it's great.