All Comments on 'The Sex Rehab Diaries: Brooklyn'

by Dancing_Doll

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

That was fucking hot! Thank you Dancing Doll!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
my, what a fine story.

more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Well Done!

You really have a talent for different and imaginative stories. This rehab series truly could be a book with the number of different characters. My only negative is, as a married woman, is that the men were married. The story could easily have not mentioned whether they were married or not. Infidelity destroys lives.

Dancing_DollDancing_Dollabout 13 years agoAuthor
Re the plot device of them being married men

I just wanted to make a mention that the reason I specified that the men were married in this story was to later justify why a character like Brooklyn would go to Sex Rehab when she clearly doesn't think she has a problem. This series will mostly feature people getting caught in one way or another as being the 'precipitating event' leading the character to go for counselling. It's that "rock bottom" moment that I'm trying to capture, with a bit of tongue-in-cheek humour. As a girl that has been cheated on in the past myself, I would not condone affairs. But for the purpose of an erotica tale, the element is used purely as a plot device and for titillation. Thanks for the feedback! It's always appreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

Great storytelling skills. We are lucky someone as focused into ass play is also such a great writer. Hope to hear more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
well done miss i take my hat off for this ones

i read both story and i think they were amazing i love the fact that there is different scenes in each person you write about its not the same same story i just wonder what stacy will tell us she sounds like my kinda girl lol......oh and i hope they never actually do find a cure for there lil problem

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You always leave the reader wanting more.

As said before excellent story telling skills, very smooth and fluid. More, more, more.

P.S. Have you written anything we could find in a library?

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 3 years ago
Very enjoyable story

Love how you spun the character as a smart business woman who saw an opportunity to increase sales while having some fun in the process. ;->

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