All Comments on 'Jennifer's Mother'

by Jarhead14

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Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioover 13 years ago
Nice fantasy . . .

Dream on -- fun to be the care-free cuckolder, rather than the cuckold. But a chapter 02 would be nice to splash some cold reality in one's face -- i.e., the fun ends (and maybe his life!) when hubby figures out what is really going on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
why

why do all the idiots and sickos want to write, then when you tell them what you think they start crying. Have your dreams but don't bother the normal population with them.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Very straight to the point type of story

I liked it.

Eating out the older woman before the rest of her family came down for breakfast is wicked.

Now the author has to fill in all of the blanks, or questions that the first chapter has brought .

How did this affair start and does he fuck her very often? That's some of the questions that I have.

Good start and I hope to see more soon. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The daughter knew?

That part seemed unclear.

katibkatibover 13 years ago
So much...

Wow! You said so much with so few words; that is an accomplishment that more writers in this playpen should emulate. You created a gem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1 star

nobody to like here

Greyhair61Greyhair61almost 12 years ago
Nice.

Please, disregard the naysayers who take it upon themselves to police the work of others.

Well done.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 11 years ago
well written -

Of course the women suck but the story was a good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

too short

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed the story. Where is the sequel?

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