by Jarhead14
Dream on -- fun to be the care-free cuckolder, rather than the cuckold. But a chapter 02 would be nice to splash some cold reality in one's face -- i.e., the fun ends (and maybe his life!) when hubby figures out what is really going on.
why do all the idiots and sickos want to write, then when you tell them what you think they start crying. Have your dreams but don't bother the normal population with them.
I liked it.
Eating out the older woman before the rest of her family came down for breakfast is wicked.
Now the author has to fill in all of the blanks, or questions that the first chapter has brought .
How did this affair start and does he fuck her very often? That's some of the questions that I have.
Good start and I hope to see more soon. Thanks
Wow! You said so much with so few words; that is an accomplishment that more writers in this playpen should emulate. You created a gem.
Please, disregard the naysayers who take it upon themselves to police the work of others.
Well done.