All Comments on 'A Bed Time Story Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great

Great story loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Outstanding

The second chapter of this story is outstanding romantic drama, superior to the first chapter in every way. The characters are appealing, and the plot develops further in this chapter. The love scene is beautifully written, and actually advances the plot but never dominates it.

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