A very well-crafted story which, unlike many of the 'quick-jerk' authors who wrap their tales in a very flimsy plot, told a story, and beautifully. Thank you.
It was nicely written but left me dissatisfied. More a very sad touch romance than an incest story without the happy ending. I had such high hopes when I started it but still was a good read just not to my taste. If you are looking for an incest happy ending or even a beginning look elsewhere.
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Worth the read
That was a great start ,but lets see where it goes.
So far so good
Chapter 1 was a hell of a start can't wait to see what 2 is like!
Nice twist
Usually it's the girl who has the doubts after crossing the line. Can't wait for the next of many chapters (I hope). More......please and thank you!
too short
too short. Should have at two or three pages worth. Not good
Nice
Sound like the beginings of a good series, although, it was a little short.
At least she let her brother know what she thinks of him.
I hope that he isn't such a tight ass that it doesn't keep him from finding her and giving her what she wants.
Excellent
A very well-crafted story which, unlike many of the 'quick-jerk' authors who wrap their tales in a very flimsy plot, told a story, and beautifully. Thank you.
This took a year?
That's about one paragraph per week.
Quick note to the anons
This is just the first chapter! Relax and ease into it.
The end product is going to be 7 chapters long, at around 57 print pages total.
Mmmm okay...
This should be a movie LMAOOOO
Not what i expected
It was nicely written but left me dissatisfied. More a very sad touch romance than an incest story without the happy ending. I had such high hopes when I started it but still was a good read just not to my taste. If you are looking for an incest happy ending or even a beginning look elsewhere.
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