Second Chances Ch. 00

I liked it...

A good start, shame is was only a page long. Perhaps it would have been better if you just told the whole story and not tried to turn it into a novel. However that said, I liked it and look forward to the next one.

Not enough

Yes this is a good start but even as Chapter "00" this needs more -- lots more. Don't let us down.

Ok Start

I Agree with dezurtdawg this needs more
it has an interesting premise Brother and Twin Sister.
could she want her Brother for herself?

Interesting start

I can't bring myself to vote until the story is close to being finished.

Looks like there is already an incest freak reading, congrats to you. But really the beginning was good, you introduced us to the characters and set the drama in motion. Look forward to reading more.

Good start,and then...

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Is this going to be continued?

Yet another ASSHOLE wannabe writer on this site who WON'T finish a story!