All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law Massage'

by champ1on

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Lovely_Emma_21Lovely_Emma_21about 13 years ago
More???

Would love to hear more! Please...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice story

Please continue. This was very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
NICE

I really and I mean really liked this.......MORE

champ1onchamp1onabout 13 years agoAuthor

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amsterdamamsterdamabout 13 years ago
Excellent

Very good story Champ - nice slow build up adding to the anticipation of their erotic encounter. The only slight criticism is that the ending lets it down. No proper end to the story or hint of more to follow and the last sentence is poor English. Minor point though - really enjoyed it and hope you continue the story.

Buttologist-WallyButtologist-Wallyabout 13 years ago
Love the story

I absolutely love stories about older women with ample bodies and younger men (sons, and in-laws). I was sad to see it end where it did, as the man had such a fixation about Fel's fantastically generous ass, that I wanted to read about him paying homage to it... fondling it, caressing it, kissing it, licking it, tongue-fucking it... and finally fucking Fel's big ass. I can only open there will be a Part 2.

XodanXodanalmost 13 years ago
Not much about her ass...

...Great story nonetheless. Hope there is a follow up. Normaly with all the Hours they have to kill, this should do. Waiting for second chapter.

Thanks for sharing this erotic story.

JhMcKnJhMcKnover 10 years ago
Grey Pubes

I ove the fact that the author indicated that Fel had "grey pubes' . Women's pubic haiir does change color as they age and does turn grey. It is quite sexy to see a woman with grey pubic hair.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More, MORE. P L E A S E ! ! !

There has to be more.

akeyesxakeyesxabout 7 years ago
Nice story, very plausible.

Some years ago I would have loved to gotten into a position like that with the lady who eventually became my MIL - there were 30 years separating the 'then' and 'now.' And 'now' was nearly 15 years ago.

She was a BIG titted, hot lady - you could tell just by the way she did and said things.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice story

Only 'could have' not 'could of.'

Overall though very very good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

That was so hottt I would love to do that to my bbw mother in law

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot!

Very intense! Loved the thick grey pubic hair--that is so real. And, she was wet and tight. Wow! Every man's dream.

BroadusBroadusalmost 3 years ago

Your story hit the bull’s eye on my secret fantasy. Great , hot story and love the building sexual tension.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot hot. Nice n juicy. Well written n edited. Great

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome! I have wanted my MIL for over 20 years!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Hard work.

Congratulations you managed to fit nearly all the clichès into this story.

It's not of It's have. And people are saying this is a well written story? Easily pleased then.

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