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Very Nice!
A very fine first story. You both sound like nice people with a lot to share about your sexuality. Please continue.
Oh, and you may get some very negative comments from some mentally ill people who hate loving wives stories but somehow manage to spend a great deal of time reading them and commenting on how sick and awful they are. Just ignore them.
Thanks for sharing!
Great story.
I echo the advice to ignore these "fascist police" who want to stifle creativit
OK
You used the word "journey" 4 times in the first 5 lines. Repetition like that makes it hard to read. Then more similar mistakes throughout that detract. Keep working on it, you will get better.
1 star
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Good effort
I enjoyed the story. Really do not care if it is real or fantasy. Not sure why some get bent out of shape reading erotic tales. Makes one wonder about them on a personal level. Why are they reading them? Keep it up, nice erotic touch to it all.
You're off to a good start here.
Let's hope your characters remain communicative, and take care of each other and their marriage as they explore.
As for the STD's, etc. - yeah. Some people just don't understand the idea of escapist erotic fiction.
1 star.
Webothdo likes the story. 1 star.
great story
Nice set up and potential. Hope the next chapters are not too cucky. Well written in a gentle style.
fabulous
Absolutely LOVE the story. 5 STARS!!!
wonderful story!
Just found your stories on Lit and I love this one! Annie is my dream girl!
I guess the 5 stars say I like it.
That was some story and hot as hell. I think you said in your profile that these stories are autobiographical. If they are, you are one very fortunate dude to have a wife like her.
The exhibionist element adds a lot to your stories. Her willingness to show off is erotic in the extreme.
I look forward to reading more of your stories. I know I will see myself in the place of some of the men she goes with. Oh, but were it true.
Hmm, if she also likes women, that will make her ever more erotic.
Wonderful
You have a wonderful, nice, loving sexy wife there. I love you sharing your story.
Great Build Up
The background is excellent and builds up nicely for what, hopefully, is to come in the later chapters. Thanks for the great story!
Very nice intro ...
... great to hear the story presented from both points of view. And it's always so sexy to hear how a hotwife relationship begins ... and how it develops. Looking forward to reading on!
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