by Irish Moss
"We were standing at the foot of the bed, making out, but how we ended up there isn't really important." I was disappointed to say the least. There's no story here ... just a description of a sex act between 2 people with no relationship. You lost my interest right from the beginning. The juiciness of the sex for me comes from the story of how the partners wound up there in the 1st place.
Yes, it was gratuitous sex alone... but freckle-covered women are the object of my every erotic fantasy, a fetish which you seem to share.. so I loved it.