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The Love of Two Sisters

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/24/11

Wonderful story

I hope you will continue with this story.

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by Anonymous01/24/11

eh

it wasnt very detailed when you came around to talking about them having sex.

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by Anonymous01/29/11

more please

detailed sex was a bit lacking but the love and story were definitly there. If you'll do more i'm willing to wait for the detailed sex.

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by Anonymous09/28/11

My only complaint...

Was that you had this wonderful, beautiful, strong tomboy and you turned her into some big breasted fem. I hate the fact that tomboys don't get the attention that they deserve. Other then that it was a wonderful romantic story.

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by link8804/10/14

kew

Sweet ending

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