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by GuiltyPleasure01/21/11

I hope....

...this is the first of twelve poems inspired by the signs. This one is lovely, I particularly like the final lines .......

"can the one read or sing or knit while
the other’s rictus purls
from pain to pleasure?"

Tess

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by Angeline01/21/11

Excellent

love the way the ends floats down to earth from the strtosphere, and coming from someone who's a Gemini through and through I think it's spot on. :-)

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by UnderYourSpell01/22/11

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I seem to remember this from the series you did before, very clever well thought out and written

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As a Gemini

you get a smartical award. You are simply good, and it would be coolio to see all twelve signs written, and then all reposted in one long series after completion. Also think this would be nice with the sign above it as an illustrated.

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by twelveoone01/23/11

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for something I have no interest in, and for Roman gods, this rocks:
esp.
sick of each other’s sight but
constrained to stay:
eternal catamites, prey to
sex-starved wanderers who
lust conjunction with each
very nice play on conjuction, and I can't help it-if you ever want to form an retro disco band you have the title:
The Lust Conjunction

as always 100, well earned

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