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To quote....
....Bernie Taupin -
"And I would have liked to have known you
But I was just a kid" -
Im not aware of f'yams age but he was obviously born too late to meet Louise Brooks. An all-too-familiar Hollywood story of manipulation and courage. The don't make 'em like that any more.
I find this a bit prosey in places but five gold ones from me.
Tess
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Made me smile especially '“I couldn’t unbuckle the Bible Belt,” she said,
though she fucked like a stoat, trying.
I don't know who the actress is nor do I understand the title, but I enjoyed the read very much
A good tribute to Mary Louise Brooks.
Poet Guy does not understand the ochre paper, purple ink theme that the author considers important enough to reprise at the end of the poem. Generally, he considers this a pretty good elegy for an interesting actress that fridayam obviously has a Jones for.
This is OK. Poet Guy has several iconic female figures he has Jonesyness for. So join the club.
Nice poem.
Kewl line
“I couldn’t unbuckle the Bible Belt,” she said,
though she fucked like a stoat, trying.
Sir friday, this is my ending poem on this friday cuz I be sleepy, but I must say, you do have a knack for coming up with totally-coolio-smartical-blow-my-tits-away lines.
Dude, brilliant!
I love the fucked like a stoat, bible belt thing. I dam wish I'd though of them. I don't know the actress but I don't think it's necessary to enjoy this. Getting a recommend.
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anything, I say, would be a reprise. LOVED it. Some of the parts reminded me of some of the crap (excuse me, fine poetry(actually humour)) I would write (I just would have been more vicious). Here I think the British timing works better.
I gave it a 100, gleefully, regretfully I couldn't give it more.
this is fine fine
yes it is.
what did i love about it? everything. from the pictures you paint to the deliciousness of sounds with phrases such as:
took her to Rochester,
immured her under the Falls
and:
the Moguls, smelling trouble,
gladly shipped her to Europe,
hurried into History.
here, i only find myself looking for a different way for you to say 'which I found':
short memoirs in short-lived magazines which I found
in dusty stacks in London.
this is definitely one of my favourites of yours, friday. fantastic :D
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