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by Anonymous

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by Tavadelphin05/10/13

He did it so well

And she bit ans swallowed it whole - a bitch coming and going -

She did have evry chance to put the incident in a reasonable perpsective but only though of herself -

Now her self respect - gone, the affair a matter of public record which cost her em[loyer and lover much, her job will be history, the affair almost certainly ruined - works for me -

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by cantbuymy05/10/13

husband got out well that is all that matters. he got himself $650,000.00 and got rid of the cunt.

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by Anonymous07/20/13

This is NO ending.....

No pain on her part; all the pain on his part. Now, does this seem right? Nope, no ending to this tale.

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by Odyssey_00107/20/13

Wow.... enjoyed the story

Great plot and nice twist... I found it a bit disturbing the hubby was willing to forget/ forgive wife's 10+ years continuous cheating and the kids not being his, if the wife was willing to "forgive him". This titbit did not prevent me from enjoying the story though... well done....

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by Anonymous07/20/13

Missing

The story was good but missing her side as to why she did it.

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by cantbuymy07/20/13

who gives a fuck why - she did it that is all that matters. she is a cheating cunt, wanted to have a word horse for a husband and someone to raise her bastards and still fuck around.
nothing more needs to be said.

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by Anonymous07/20/13

STOP!!!

He did lose, her loved her more than life itself. He was devastated but still was willing to work with her and not just for the kids but, for him as well. He hoped she would come to a talk with him where he could disclose his knowledge in hopes that she might love him enough to give up the boss.

They both lost, she loved him, for intent she never showed any signs of infidelity and he thought he was a very lucky guy but, stupidly stood her ground and refused to even give him a moment of compassion - he now saw a different woman.

They both lost!

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by TornadoTys07/22/13

No Ending

Nice twist in court room for the husband.
How ever is does describe why Nacy cheated ! ?

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by OneShotOne07/23/13

Well done

Beautifully played.

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by ariesgirl09/10/13

Nice turn about but we are missing the part of the story as to how the husband came to find out about her affair.

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by betrayedbylove09/26/13

Whore

I know how he found out. There must have been a test done at the kids school to have their DNA on file and the father checked and found out he wasn't the biological father. That's why he was leaving the hospital at the very beginning . The wife was a cheating skank whore from the beginning and should die in pain..

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by IronDragon10/16/13

Great flash tale!

I get the feeling that Hubby wouldn't have taken her back if she'd "forgiven" him. Seems to me that he just said that in court as a way to embarrass her further. Well played! Wifey was left completely embarrassed and jobless, and Boss Bull was left broke, embarrassed, probably divorced if he was married, and jobless.

Hubby may have been embarrassed by the long-term cuckolding, but the $650,000 settlement, as well as the Asshole Boss getting fired and ruined, would go a long way toward soothing the ego. LOL

No need to know why Wifey cheated. Excuses are like assholes. Everyone has them, and they all fuckin' stink.

5 HUGE Stars!

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by Anonymous02/26/14

whore

when you play you pay

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by rightbank02/27/14

Nope it wasn't a school DNA test that did it

that is why he had to have "the result of a simple test" himself.
But, it could have been a blood type mismatch. The daughters had a blood type that they could not have had if they were his.

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by rightbank06/01/14

it would have been so much more satisfying

with even one short paragraph sharing the information leading up to his visit to the hospital. just enough to tell us how/what he learned that led him to get the paternity tests.
as it is, it is an extreme flash story. just a tad to short.

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by KarenE12/29/14

@IronDragon I Disagree

While we will obviously never know, I see no reason not to take him at his word.

If he didn't intend to reconcile, why the charade of his "affair"?

The only reasonable explanation for his action was the one he gave - if SHE had been willing to "put it behind them" and work on the marriage, then he would have been willing to do the same.

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by Anonymous01/20/15

My problem with this?

Is that in his rush to garner some revenge, he drug their daughters through all the mud. You don't think they found out about the divorce, then the lawsuit against her boss and then the lawsuit against the Company? And I wonder how girls, 11 and 8, took the news that he wasn't their biological Father and then witnessed him trying to destroy their Mother? And why would a Judge decree joint custody? He had no standing as their Father. He was just the smuck that raised them. I'm thinking they didn't want to see or have anything to do with him. That when they saw the Court appointed shrink they said they wanted to live with their Mother and not see their Father. He cut his nose off to spite his face in this sorry tale of revenge gone bad.

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by sinsational8302/07/15

NICE

I have to say this was actually a pretty cool story. it truly made me chuckle the ending was a surprise needless to say it was different.

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by Tw0Cr0ws02/07/15

face value

I take what he said was his motive at face value.
He wanted her to feel the same sort of pain that he felt.
Since she was a hypocrite she felt that pain.

Yes it was ugly and painful for the children, but the husband was also an innocent victim of the wife.

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by Bfreetorun03/21/15

I was going to slap this into the Favorite folder but it was already there.

His wife deserved what she got plus more. Thank you for writing.

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by tazz31711/10/15

TABLE TURNERS HAVE TO BE DAMN CAREFUL

sometimes the legs become tangled. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous06/02/16

Excellent Story

It would appear that the feminazises and the girly boys such as FD45 didn't like the story. They failed to see how the husband got the high ground by begging her to take him back even though he knew it was his wife who was the adulteress for 10 years. She also would have to pay for his lawyer since she initiated the divorce. So he got her twice. Great BTB and he didn't go to jail.

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by Anonymous07/10/16

Yoi are fun and twisty.

5*

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