All Comments on 'L'esprit de l'escalier'

by evesummerall

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

I can't wait to read more of this story.

obscuredobscuredover 13 years ago

Oh wow! Great story! I love these characters... such interesting people. Well done!

raconteuseraconteuseover 13 years ago
Erotica par excellence

An utterly exquisite story. You wrote the conflict, the crisis, and the resolution perfectly. The character development and the dialogue were expertly handled, also. I look forward to more stories from you. Brava!

philosphilosover 13 years ago
well done

Loved the characters. Nice mix of funny and sexy. I really enjoyed it and hope to see more

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Funny, Believable and Hot

what could be wrong with that? Good stuff. Keep writing.

Dual_TriodeDual_Triodeabout 13 years ago
Terrific!

Very smart and witty.

"...a sign I was, for all intents and purposes, totally screwed."

Brilliant. Harriet has no respect, stealing your thunder like that. Now it's time to steal hers... ;)

Her_ToyboyHer_Toyboyalmost 11 years ago
Erotically Concise

Amazing how much heat you generated in so short a span. Throw in deft characterization, palpable sense of place and crisp, believable dialogue and it couldn't all possibly fit into a single page. Unless the author is extremely skilled.

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