by bossegirlbad
Excellent first post. A bit longer story would even be better!
Great first post.....Are you thinking of following it with part 2 or moving on to another story??
AndyEx
FOR A STORY THIS IS TOOO FICTIONAL, THIS WOULDN'T HAPPEN NO FATHER
WOULD LET HIS LITTLE GIRL TAKE THAT MUCH ABUSE,I KNOW I WOULDN'T..
RIGHT FROM THE START IT WAS OUT OF LINE NO GRANDDAD WOULD ACT LIKE THAT UNLESS HE HAS SOMETHING FUCKED UP IN HIS MINE WHICH MORE THAN LIKELY IS I WOULD GIVE THIS STORY A LOW --3 HE WILL HAVE TO PROOF READ HIS STORY .........................................................'R'
pooint of your writing is you should not used anal intercourse as it only turns people off.acc
Love Grandfather/granddaughter incest!! You did a great job with this story and I hope to see more like it. It was crudely exciting and hot which is what us incest lovers look for...lol. This definitely COULD happen and just this way too. Am happy to have you with us.
im actually scared my grandpa wants to have sex with me n im only 12 years old i feel like im trap n i never try to be alone with him but ik that day will come :( help plz
That was amazing! OMG so hott!!!! I want to find an old guy like this one!
Everyone here sucks-up to female writers. Please. Only you can prevent shitty fiction.
I see it was written in 2011. Good to hear you gave it up.
I loved this story! I want somebody to roleplay this with me!! Oooo I;m so nice & hot right now! I think I'll have to go touch myself until I feel even yummier....
want grandpa to fuck me - my cunt, my ass - fuck me several times a day so cum runs out of all my holes