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*****
Five.
This is an amazing poem
You need to submit it somewhere with a wider audience. It's too good to just sit here. Just my opinion, but it has a big wow factor for me.
Wow.....
......factor indeed! Now I'm going to read more of your poetry because this is the first for me.
This has so much going for it, the hint at adversity in the first strophe, redemption and gratitude follow. I agree, this shouldn't languish here, submit it to a magazine or e-zine for wider exposure.
Tess
P.S.
Perfect title!
this has that
feel good factor - every reader should buy into this, effortlessly, and feel better about themselves having read it. lovely phrasing, pacing, imagery. straight 5 for this poem that reminds us to love ourselves, whatever our past transgressions.
Yes
to all the previous comments. This is a great journey from one who emerges in fulfillment. It gave me a few chills as I realized that reaching such an apex leads to emotional maturity--the comfort of oneself and his/her place in totality.
*
cut,cut,cut, the journey reaches for and achieves too much cliches.
100 anyway.
*****
Five.
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