by Selkiegone
I enjoyed the story which I found to be quite different and a nice change from some of the same old stories. Keep writing I will watch for more of your stuff.
Being a sound tech in high school and college, you actually know the technique and way that a play or musical would work. Great job. It's nice reading a story with the actual chance of the plot happening.
Good, outside of the area wherein you describe Connie, which should be separated from the rest of the sentence.