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*****
Five.
Excellent
I love what you are doing with this series and this is wonderful: you've brought stars to life and given them personality so compelling I envision them in earthly ways.
Here I come......
......tail-end Charlene with not much to add. I think this short poem packs a big punch. Mythes and erotica, who could ask for anything more?
Tess
I swear
I left a comment this morning cuz of that horns to bestiality line. I do think this is kewl Friday, and you might think of linking them all when you are done in one long poem so we can read the set together. Just a thought my friend. I keep seeing the heavens at war or the symbol floating above each poem. Hmmm, be a nice illustrated...thinking.
Don't let me be myth-understood.
I love this poem. Not up on this mythology but its a good piece. Getting a recommend.
i'm truly enjoying the individuality of each piece
slowly, they are forming a skyful of constellations. i always did take pleasure in star gazing, and wonder how these poems would go down as a voice-over at the London Planetarium ;)
as ever, between the good lines are even better ones, or ones that make my mind 'twitch':
towards Aldebaran's dead red eye.
dripping, confused, pregnant with nations:
you manage to animate the skies with these pieces, friday. looking forward to the next when it arrives.
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good, you can read my upcoming; which is populated with such celestial (and bestial) riff-raff
easy 100
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