- Romance
- Fifteen Cards
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All Comments on 'Fifteen Cards'
by oggbashan
- 13 Comments
Rokkn59about 13 years agoRead each one of these and thought how the heart and mind perceives things. Thanks for your thoughts.
estragonabout 13 years agoFifty words, and each one counts. Oggbashan, you set a very high bar. And hurdle it convincingly. Well done!
Anonymousabout 13 years ago... I am amazed how much story and sentiment can be transported in these lovely minatures. Very well done.
jaynee1about 13 years agoAgree with Anonymous about the Haiku feel.You convey a sense of place,dimension and feeling with an economy of language. Brilliant "Flash Fiction." Thank you!
EesomeBeastieabout 13 years agoSuperb. You covered such a wide range with these 15 'cards'. Five stars.
Boxlicker101about 13 years agoAs always, I found your fifty word stories to be very interesting. However, is there an error in #7? It loks as if you reversed the pronouns in the last line.
PrincessErinabout 13 years agoI really liked this story. Neglect was very painful to read. I'd say good luck in the contest but you're not eligible :)
Noiraabout 13 years agoI had a good giggle over 'Choose'... ah, this is great, so many twists and turns on Valentine's Day in so little words!
LunaEroticaMysticaabout 13 years agoI think my favorite was Be Careful! Wise words for sure. Closer was cute and Choose cracked me up. :)
~LunaEroticaMystica
JRavenabout 13 years agoI liked that one best.
It takes a strong wordsmith to do so much with so little.
Very well done!
boatbummabout 7 years agoThese are all very nice, but I especially enjoyed Anonymous and Apart.
Thanks!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoEvery one of the 15x 50 words chosen like a poem So much to think about. Amazed.
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