Agree with Anonymous about the Haiku feel.You convey a sense of place,dimension and feeling with an economy of language. Brilliant "Flash Fiction." Thank you!
As always, I found your fifty word stories to be very interesting. However, is there an error in #7? It loks as if you reversed the pronouns in the last line.
English
NIce but so true
Read each one of these and thought how the heart and mind perceives things. Thanks for your thoughts.
That's Why He Plays in the Premier League
Fifty words, and each one counts. Oggbashan, you set a very high bar. And hurdle it convincingly. Well done!
Very well done!
Almost haiku in nature
As always ...
... I am amazed how much story and sentiment can be transported in these lovely minatures. Very well done.
Flash!
Agree with Anonymous about the Haiku feel.You convey a sense of place,dimension and feeling with an economy of language. Brilliant "Flash Fiction." Thank you!
Superb
Superb. You covered such a wide range with these 15 'cards'. Five stars.
Very Interesting
As always, I found your fifty word stories to be very interesting. However, is there an error in #7? It loks as if you reversed the pronouns in the last line.
Amazing
I really liked this story. Neglect was very painful to read. I'd say good luck in the contest but you're not eligible :)
I had a good giggle over 'Choose'... ah, this is great, so many twists and turns on Valentine's Day in so little words!
I think my favorite was Be Careful! Wise words for sure. Closer was cute and Choose cracked me up. :)
~LunaEroticaMystica
06. Anonymous
I liked that one best.
It takes a strong wordsmith to do so much with so little.
Very well done!
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