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by Allyourbase

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Several.....

....cuts above the average M/s poem found in here.

Tess

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
Ouchy

the first stanza sets a harsh tone.

KurokamiKurokamiabout 13 years ago
I know I just commented on the other one too, but...

This is the kind of writing that makes me feel bad about my own. Poetry isn't usually my thing, but I'm glad I made a point of reading the two you've submitted. They're pretty damn great.

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Allison Kapitein, a.k.a. Allyourbase. Kinky, genderqueer, poly. I write requests if there's enough creative chemistry between you and me. I took some stories down that were here since forever, but I wouldn't write the same way again. If one of them coincidentally was your favo...