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Carny Fun Ch. 04

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by floaturboat01/26/11

Great ending to an excellent series!

Jamie,

You did it again. Your writing is vivid and very believable. I enjoyed this tremendously. I can't wait to read more of your work.

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by lil_cocktease07/04/11

Wonderful!

Very well-written, and I particularly liked that the girl wasn't just a mannequin to be used and fucked. She had her own dark desires, even if she didn't particularly like to acknowledge them, and I love it. Keep on writing, Jamie. These are great.

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