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by TenderSummerKiss

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Yeah not bad for a first story!

You seem to me to have what it takes to be a good writer of erotic fiction. Short but to the point! Roger does seem to be taking a lot on faith with his friends daughter though! Still not bad,keep it up!

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