The thing is, as you kept bringing up the subject, it felt like dad was mostly along for the ride. In the end, I couldn't decide whether or not the girls really loved him as a man - as opposed to a combination of 1) giving their dad a sexual gift of gratitude; 2) giving their dad a mercy fuck; and 3) using their dad to launch their sex lives, intending to move on in a short while.
There's nothing wrong with that (IMO), though I personally much prefer a romantic fantasy. The uncertainty of the bouquet's motivations made it hard for me to get immersed in the fantasy, and therefore made the story less enjoyable than it otherwise could have been. Just sayin'.
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Anonymous01/26/11
Beethoven
Hi,
Thank you for a beautiful story. One troll-comment though: I spent a third of the story thinking of Beethoven's 6th (must be symphony, there are only 5 piano concertos) - and the fact that there's no harp in that symphony. What was the harpist doing on stage?
Luckily, I spent the remaining two thirds of the story enjoying your style and the intriguing scenario.
I must admit the idea of father-daughter sex is difficult for me, as the father of two young women about whom I've never had a sexual thought. But this is an outstanding story.
Considering all the possible implications for your pen name, it is an understatement to say my expectations for this story were off the mark. In fact, I am delighted to say I was pleasantly surprised in the diametrically opposed direction you decided to take. Your telling of this story was imbued with such tenderness, leaving a positive imprint on my heart. Thank you for taking the time to write about a controversial topic that is far outside societal norms, with such care and finesse!
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Anonymous07/28/11
God dam
Who the fuck man
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Anonymous06/23/12
A true masterpiece
of the hundreds of stories I've read here this is by far one of the best. It made me laugh aloud, and even cry. I've never reacted to a story as I have this one, I'd love to read more just like it, but even if this is the only one you ever produce of its nature and calibre I must say; Well done.
English
Six stars out of five!
Wonderful writing! Intelligent without being showy, sincere and genuine throughout...and damn sexy at the same time!
If i could i would vote for this story ten more times!
Thank you for sharing your talent. It's rare indeed that an erotic story can be healing as well as hot, but you managed it seemingly without effort.
I guess there's nothing left to say but "Wow!"
I'd give it 10
Well written story. Well concieved story line. The second of two VERY good stories by this author. Highly recommended.
A lovely fantasy
Amazing imagination ~ fascinating story ~ well done!
Nice one...
A very nice fantasy indeed.
The thing is, as you kept bringing up the subject, it felt like dad was mostly along for the ride. In the end, I couldn't decide whether or not the girls really loved him as a man - as opposed to a combination of 1) giving their dad a sexual gift of gratitude; 2) giving their dad a mercy fuck; and 3) using their dad to launch their sex lives, intending to move on in a short while.
There's nothing wrong with that (IMO), though I personally much prefer a romantic fantasy. The uncertainty of the bouquet's motivations made it hard for me to get immersed in the fantasy, and therefore made the story less enjoyable than it otherwise could have been. Just sayin'.
Beethoven
Hi,
Thank you for a beautiful story. One troll-comment though: I spent a third of the story thinking of Beethoven's 6th (must be symphony, there are only 5 piano concertos) - and the fact that there's no harp in that symphony. What was the harpist doing on stage?
Luckily, I spent the remaining two thirds of the story enjoying your style and the intriguing scenario.
well done
and for anonymous who said "A disgusting achievement!", if it is that bad for you, what in the hell are you here for?
Gorgeous
I must admit the idea of father-daughter sex is difficult for me, as the father of two young women about whom I've never had a sexual thought. But this is an outstanding story.
Dear Scaramouche...aka Tenderheart
Considering all the possible implications for your pen name, it is an understatement to say my expectations for this story were off the mark. In fact, I am delighted to say I was pleasantly surprised in the diametrically opposed direction you decided to take. Your telling of this story was imbued with such tenderness, leaving a positive imprint on my heart. Thank you for taking the time to write about a controversial topic that is far outside societal norms, with such care and finesse!
God dam
Who the fuck man
A true masterpiece
of the hundreds of stories I've read here this is by far one of the best. It made me laugh aloud, and even cry. I've never reacted to a story as I have this one, I'd love to read more just like it, but even if this is the only one you ever produce of its nature and calibre I must say; Well done.
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