by rpsuch
Now with 50+ chapters, I think I should make a comment. XD
It's an excellent story, and I'm always looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
but unless I am falling behind on current usage there are a couple of misplaced words in here... Doesn't harm the flow too much and no damage done to residuals but you were always so careful in the past....
Many moons ago I wished you would continue this story but you chose to rewrite it. I liked this version much more anmd I still find myself hunting down more chapters. I really like how much Ashley has changed.
RP. Ikeep waiting for the preverbial glich in this relationship but sure didn't see this coming. I sure hope this will strengthen the bond between Jeff And Ashley.She seems to have matured quite a bit since the onset. Keep up the good work,Ciao.
Hey uh, maybe at the end of thi u should consider actually publishing this??
with the other commenters. I like Ashley again. Looking for another down chapter...