Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 49

tease! give me the next part!

I'm supposed to tease

Check out any book on writing. A chapter isn't supposed to end with "and then he saved her." It's supposed to end, "the train was almost upon her."

Literotica has scheduled 49-52 to be posted in four consecutive days. If you're impatient, which I would be in your place, I have posted through chapter 52 on my site.

Getting Frustrated

I am getting as frustrated as she is...sorry, it is just that your series is one that I have really enjoyed, but I am starting to have difficulty maintaining interest as it is stretching on with such small snippets or snapshots into their life and relationship. Good writing, good storyline, but.....it is dragging a bit!

I hate cliffhangers!

But love this fluffhead...

Time!

RP, you go at your speed its teasing but building to a crescendo, I just hope we'll not be disappointed with the outcome.She seems to be getting antsy and discouraged with the arrangements. Keep up the good work.

Good

Still reading.

Confrontation

You can't leave us hanging with what happened between Jeff and her father. I need follow up.