Making Mommy Mine

Iniatially, I thought this would be an interesting story. But the story went down-hill, and the youing man acted and sounded like stupid porn-whore. No class,

:)

I loved it, keep writing and ignore those anonymous assholes

Very average and formulaic - dull.

So Hot

Those who did not liike your story are just here for a quick yank. This was wonderful. I would love to see another chapter. It will only get better!

great, another chapter please

great,another chapter please

More, including much more bondage.

Really good.
Bit heavy on the name calling, but otherwise I think it would make a good series.
Possibility of more players?

wow great read

great story

can not wait for the next chapter

Can't wait for the second chapter

One of the better incest stories I've read on this site. While some find the language to strong I'm a proponent of dirty talk while having sex and so is my wife.

The story line is set up well and with a few exceptions believable and that's what makes it so hot.

One other thing I liked about your story is that it was written by a woman. Most on this site are by men it just bring a different prospective to this type story line.

Great Buildup

Great sex just like great literature is all about the "buildup". You gave us that and even delivered some hot sex for those that must wank to the first story in a possible series. You even left the door open for the MFF threesome.

loved it woud love to know what happens when he involves Hanna

good start

Let's get Hannah and her daughter into the fray :)

Wanting more...

You have the start of a great series of stories if you want. There are hints of some many ways the story can go with her friends and the others mentioned in the story. So many potential people to dominate Mommy. Thanks and 5 stars for a very good story.

Really hot

A well written story, very erotic and kinky. I want to read more of how he puts his mother through her paces.

Thanks for the read.

Delicious story

Very well written & sexy as hell! I agree with some of the other comments that this can go further, like including Hannah with or without her daughter.

Ryan
hotfunfla@yahoo.com

been there done that

It was like reading my diary. I am 47 and first fucked my son two years ago...i can't give it up..and he can't either. we do bring a friend ( his or mine) into it once in a while..I do anything he needs to do or see, including eating his girl firends.

mommy takes it all

awesome sexy story. make mommy mine.
so very erotic love it hope there's going to be another part. this part was very exciting love both the story and the writing

Ahhh yes

Such a good mommy.....provides her son with anything he wants and desires........Oh the possibilities!

Bravo !!!

Very well done. I loved it.

Very Good

Very well written and very believable.

Thanks for writing an excellent story! Looking forward to more in this series if that's the direction you're going.

Wonderful

I just can not stop fucking milfs, and fucked my mothers brains out time and time again, after having eaten her cunt till she could not stop cumming.

Alright

Dramatic effect -- impact -- might have been greater had Jeremy not been such a self-centered, conceited, manipulative bastard. You depicted him well. Fewer "sluts" and "whores" could be tolerated in the conversations. Yes, an added chapter with Hannah would be welcomed by your eager fans.

great

maybe one of the best i have read, true sounding, very believable, hot , sexy fuck scenes, and a good plot, more would be great it turn me on for sure

Hope this was just chapter 1

Great story well written but I want to read more. You could start with Hanna and what about Jeremy really taking Eddie out of the picture and maybe getting Eddies wife involved.

Not 1972

Very good read, just please find some more words for penis than "missile". This isn't the cold war.

Okay, it must be me

I find the story's direction odd and the reviewer comments odder. Going 'backdoor' is normally gay, or recreational sex. The meaning and 'weight of that moment' is not great. Unless your mum is a tart who sleeps with everyone, I would think that there might be some other direction you might steer your romance...or, it must just be me...

Wow

Never thought I would like a mother/son story as much as I ended up liking this one.

please continue

great read, thanks....i'm hoping it doesn't end there

and a reminder, PLEASE NEVER use the word copious, or I'll never read you again

great

Great story. I like his control of the women. Looking forward to reading about Elaine and Hannah and maybe Sara?

Sequel!

I'd love to see a sequel chapter (or more) to this. It would be nice to see him build up a neighborhood harem while getting more into the bondage aspects.

But it also would be nice to show that while he can be a dominant type, he also really loves his mother.

More, More

Your style of prose is addicktive .... hope you add more Chapters SOON

Keep it 'cumming'

Spectacular I anticipate a sequel !! Amazing!

Best Incest Story Yet

Love the story, kept wanting more till the end. No lie, i got wet , and i am a girl. ;)

more..............

Very nice start, but this looks like it should be a three or four part story.
Hope you agree and keep'em coming soon.

part 2 ?

there has to be a part 2 with your mom and hannah aswell as sarah

great story

need you to write one for me.... about my mother-in-law offering me her ass..... because my won't ......... she staying with us at the moment... she 44 i'm 27 my wife 23

Hmm...

I wonder why it felt.. flat. Oh well, will there be another?

Loved the build-up. The only think that jarred was the way Jeremy used Hannah so cynically to get as his mum. That spoiled the moment for a short while, but then the story carried me past it. Still, I think Jeremy should make amends to Hannah - and all the more reason for a part 2!

Good

This was a well developed story and although I dislike the topic, there are many readers who love this type of story and will really enjoy it. Good luck in the contest.

Yawn!

Fiction is nice, but only when it can be conceived as believable! This is just too way out there.

Moms shouldn't be submissive

Believe the premise believe the story.
I didn't believe the premise. Why after seeing her son with other women in her own house didn't she say something to her son.
Oh, I know, she was submissive and her son used this against her.
Like most men I also dreamed about fucking my mother. But I did not want her to be submissive like Jeremy's mother.
Can this story be believed, I think not. If I remember correctly, All older women fall under Jeremy's spell
If a son wants to have sex with his mother, it may be hard to convience her to do it. If a mother wants to have sex with her son all she has to do is ask. 99% of all boys and men will never say no.
And what's with all these stories where the sons always have a hard on that the mother sees but does nothing about it.

I am 6 foot 1, 230 pounds of pure muscle

So is he 6 foot 1 inch and 230 pounds or 6 foot tall and 1,230 pounds?

Sorry but I laughed when I read this part and when I am laughing, I tend not to find things erotic.

Loved it!

Great build up and detail. I look forward to reading about what happens next!

very erotic

wonderful fantasy, i enjoyed the story.

Great fuck

It was an excellent fuck story. I want couple more chapters. Definitely want to see what happens with mommy and Hannah. I am a girl, not lesbian but my pussy is dripping wet right now. I'm going to grab my toy and start playing. I almost want him inside my pussy too and fuck me wild. That's what a story should do, make the reader feel like a part of it.

great

that was a great read three times!!

fucking hot

i looovvved it

Excellent

I came twice. More, please!!

more!!!! need some more hot acition with Sarah and Hannah as well as making all of them his milf sex slaves

UNBELIEVABLE SEXXXXXXXY

I understand the true meaning of being sadused by an older woman, from previous experiences in the Military, but to Actuall get your Mother, to go against all her inhabitions.....CUDOS to you my friend....