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by perl1001/30/11

Great Idea

While I'll be looking forward to more chapters of this story, your build up was quite sparse, and needed much more dialog. So many scenes could have used a great deal more detail, and the spanking scene alone just came and went. Still, your story was quite a turn on. It's not that you did anything wrong, just not enough right.

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by Anonymous09/27/14

Victoria's perspective

It would be really cool to read the same events from Victoria's perspective.

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