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Nice Direction
I like the direction the story is headed, besides the brewing storm of deception desire and retribution. Not to mention the reappearance of Chiku's old nemeses Samantha and Scarlett. ooh delicious intrigue is at hand. Can't wait
Definately Picking Up
Good turn of events. Loved the play between Chiku and Victoria's boyfriend. A good dose of restraint plays better and is more realistic. Also more interesting.
Interesting style
Sarah,
An interesting set of stories so far, but whilst I enjoy the stories there is something missing.
For me I think more characteristion is required of all the principle characters and more detail ...
Miranda
good story
I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Delightfully intriguing
Sorry I was late in discovering this delightfully intriguing story. Sorry to see it has not been continued or resumed... at least yet. I hope the author either takes it up again or tries her hand at another story.
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