All Comments on 'Valentine's Lingerie Gift'

Not much else I can say. You're control over the tension and the pace is remarkable. I felt myself slipping into the story, and I'm a guy. Although you used the cliche cliffhanger ending, I like how you played with yours, it maintains the pace you have set in the story and doesnt feel rushed. 5/5 from me.

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Wish I was the lucky husband.

What a lovely story about a married woman who cheats on her husband for valentines day. Lucky guy. Maybe for his birthday she can give him a bastard son, or a STD.

And call for back-up! A definite 5, hot from word one. A strokissimo!

wow 10 stars

Great Story

Absolutely loved this gift. I think I'm lightheaded now.

Part 2 is finished and will be published soon. It can't be part of the contest as only single stories are allowed and I didn't want to "bore" readers who had read the first part by just adding the second part to it, but watch for it soon.

A classic fantasy, but absolutely superbly executed. Really got me going. 5 stars well earned!

This was easily worth five stars. It was really hot, but without a lot of plot, etc. to get in the way. The only quibble would be your sentence structure in the first few paragraphs, but the rest more than made up for it.

Check out chapter 2 then :)

I read a similar story once long ago but this is better! Having the husband set it up and show up fuck ya great job Thanks good luck with the contest You have a real shot here I think! Keen writing your very good at it.

Faggot

Very hot, well written! Love to hear about a sexy lady being seduced. Great surprise ending!